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:iconmlptrixieplz: Anything you can do I can do better.

:icontwichallengeconsider:Oh really? Try to repeat this.


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:iconpinkielieplz: If there was a warehouse the size of a hoofball field in Trottingham, which had the capacity to hold ten-thousand lol's, it would be overflowing in stock right now!

Ace job on the expressions and body language, here :) And no, I'm not talking about the feathery punch line. Pony body language is one of many analytical observations I've been known to pay attention to, so I guess a simple pose done correctly means more to me than the average person :P Trixie's taken aback hoof, Twi turned to the side, cross-hoofed and giving her rival a 'no fucks given' look along with her blatant wing is all too perfect.

I must admit, while I see and appreciate the fact you've blurred the curtain and general background to put a highlight on the characters, I feel like it wasn't all too necessary given that you've already made the curtain, floorboards, etc. a color shade that really shys away from the characters' vibrancy :) Aka, they stick out fine, and I think a slightly more detailed background, at least finishing the defining lines, may have looked just as nice, if not a little better.

Just a personal preference, though :D

Very clever, very witty, good sir :clap: You've earned the watch, and I await further lols from your gallery, as well as future works :dummy:
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Oh, squee, I love how you do those two ponies' expressions, the feel and impact are set on high, they show a lot of emotion and realistic yet anime at the same time, cartoony, yes, but The shine and lighting are marvelous, giving a lot of texture too, the best I've seen so far, but wouldn't be nice to give them a furry texture on the body and face, just to make it a bit more horse-like.

I mean, the anime look of the body, head, face and hooves are nice but a bit of a fur texture would be nice, well, the mane would be a bit more hairy, or a pit, more fur or hair-like... but all and all it's still great.
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WHAT-AM-I-DOING-WUT Featured By Owner 23 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I applaud your puns.
Katputze Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member
The feather!
ScarabsCorner Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahaha!! Niiice!!
MarysPoopinSpitspot Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  New member
Lol!!! XD
Natility Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
Hahaha XD
Rainygirl3100 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think that's how feathers work but okay
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
Feathers might not work like that in our world. But in their's, they do. :-)
Rainygirl3100 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alrighty then
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
233757 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014   Artist
:D (Big Grin) Clap 
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