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January 17
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:iconmlptrixieplz: Anything you can do I can do better.

:icontwichallengeconsider:Oh really? Try to repeat this.


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:iconpinkielieplz: If there was a warehouse the size of a hoofball field in Trottingham, which had the capacity to hold ten-thousand lol's, it would be overflowing in stock right now!

Ace job on the expressions and body language, here :) And no, I'm not talking about the feathery punch line. Pony body language is one of many analytical observations I've been known to pay attention to, so I guess a simple pose done correctly means more to me than the average person :P Trixie's taken aback hoof, Twi turned to the side, cross-hoofed and giving her rival a 'no fucks given' look along with her blatant wing is all too perfect.

I must admit, while I see and appreciate the fact you've blurred the curtain and general background to put a highlight on the characters, I feel like it wasn't all too necessary given that you've already made the curtain, floorboards, etc. a color shade that really shys away from the characters' vibrancy :) Aka, they stick out fine, and I think a slightly more detailed background, at least finishing the defining lines, may have looked just as nice, if not a little better.

Just a personal preference, though :D

Very clever, very witty, good sir :clap: You've earned the watch, and I await further lols from your gallery, as well as future works :dummy:
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Oh, squee, I love how you do those two ponies' expressions, the feel and impact are set on high, they show a lot of emotion and realistic yet anime at the same time, cartoony, yes, but The shine and lighting are marvelous, giving a lot of texture too, the best I've seen so far, but wouldn't be nice to give them a furry texture on the body and face, just to make it a bit more horse-like.

I mean, the anime look of the body, head, face and hooves are nice but a bit of a fur texture would be nice, well, the mane would be a bit more hairy, or a pit, more fur or hair-like... but all and all it's still great.
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ScarabsCorner Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahaha!! Niiice!!
MarysPoopinSpitspot Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member
Lol!!! XD
Natility Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
Hahaha XD
Rainygirl3100 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think that's how feathers work but okay
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
Feathers might not work like that in our world. But in their's, they do. :-)
Rainygirl3100 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alrighty then
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
233757 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014   Artist
:D (Big Grin) Clap 
Rexlare Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's awesome.
Pinkieshy435 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Artist
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