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:iconqueenchrysalis: This day is going to be perfect


Another Chrysalis by Underpable
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This is just amazing
A alternate ending of the ever so famous episode, a ending where Queen Chrysalis succeeds in taking over Canterlot. I like how she and Shining Armour are sitting down in a tree, relaxed as they watch their kingdom burn down.
The painted style is great, along with the shading and excellent smoke effect and the small little details you put into castle, such as the swarming Changelings.
One thing that you can improve on in this is maybe that thing Chrysalis and SA is sitting on? Its kinda hard to tell what it is; try adding some texture or print if your aiming for a cloth. Also you can shade/paint that horizon a bit more since it looks like a giant VERY SMOOTH green block with a river cutting through, when Equestia is supposed to have many natural formation and civilization, unless I'm wrong and took a screenshot and there's its supposed to be like drawn.
But in general this is a beautiful piece and i absolutely love it :D
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Shadowstyle143 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
woah
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:iconlakword:
Lakword Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For some reason I find this ending a lot more realistic and nicer ^^
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LionheartedCreator Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!
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han169315 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
bad ending :))
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:iconbriar-spark:
briar-spark Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Потрясающая картинка! Красивая и смешная! :)
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:iconmagicbiaze:
MagicBIaze Featured By Owner Edited Oct 26, 2014
Nice hat, Chryssi.
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:iconrpmaestro:
RPMaestro Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
Some ponies... Just like to see the world burn.
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loopsorspool Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
Hmmm... Bad end or good end?
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W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
i dont think she would destroy that place or anyone in it cause that means less ponies to feed on
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Underpable Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student General Artist
It was her revenge after her first defeat in Canterlot. Beside she didn't kill all those ponies, she put them in the pods Another Chrysalis by Underpable
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CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
The only way to make this day perfect would to switch out Shining Armor with Sombra.
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:iconmagicbiaze:
MagicBIaze Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
Yeah, but Sombra may or may not have been brutally destroyed to bits, so... nope, not happening.
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CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
He could regenerate himself with his horn. bunneh icon17 
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:iconultradj4ever:
ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Some pony's just want to watch the world burn!
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Lord-Shanakill Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
holy shit that's terrifying.
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:iconmagicbiaze:
MagicBIaze Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
I suppose that might have been the point.
Perhaps.
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DoughnutJoe Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
The perfect end to a perfect day. :)
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CloppusMaximus Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So cute!
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cajobif Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014
Chrysalis: This, my love.... is the beginning of a new area... and you are part of it...
Shining Armor: Uh.... Yes, my love.
C: Your sister was close to stop me, but it seems she failed once I got rid of it. Even Celestia was nothing against me!
S: Uh.... Yes, my love.
C: *sigh* This green goes so well with the color of the sky...
S: But it suits your eyes much better, Chrysalis.
C: Aww... Thank you, little stallion... Now I'll...
Chrysalis was stunned. This stallion which was under her control spell, spoke freely.
C: Uh... what did you say?
S: I said that this fire looked like the one into your eyes.
C: That....that's not what exactly you said... what's going on?
Suddenly, the castle's fire extinguish and under her abashed eyes, it began to rebuilt itself.
C: WHAT?!? HOW?!?!?
Shining turned his head face the queen.
S: You thought you won didn't you?
The voice was not longer Shining's. It was a strong female voice instead. Not the one of the pink princess, but seemed from an older and more authoritarian but not the sun monarch's. She stood and took a distance from the stranger.
C: W-who are you?!?
S: That is of no importance. What is important is that you failed.
C: I.... failed? I didn't failed!!! Look at the castle...
The castle was in the same state as it was before her invasion.
C: Im-impossible!!! It was burning!
S: No more. Now that they are safe and sound, I'll make sure that this won't happen ever again!
His horn was glowing blue, but a darker blue than Cadence's. The glow enveloped her horn. She fough it back with her own magic, but the glow came back stronger. She was powerless against that mysterious foe. It caught her tired and without the support of Shining's love she was unable to strike back. The glow surrounded her crooked horn and with agonizing pain, it broke.
Chrysalis woke up screaming, covered in sweat and panting. She was in her royal bed. She stood up, still panting. One servant come in, bursting her bedchamber's door wide open while running.
Servant: My queen? Are you okay? We heard you scream and...
Chrysalis took a breath before talking.
Chrysalis: I... I'm alright. I... I only had a nightmare...
Servant: I'm relieve that your highness is okay. May I be of service while I am here?
Chrysalis: Yes. B...bring me a glass of water. Now.
Servant: Yes, my queen.
He left the room, slower and was about to close the door behind him, leaving the queen alone when she called him to come back.
Servant: Yes?
Chrysalis: W-when the Canterlot's invasion was planified again?
Servant: Your highness?
Chrysalis: I... don't remember on the spot, so could you...
Servant: Umm.... in a week, I think.
C: You're sure?
Servant: Y-yes.
C: Good. Bring me my glass of water now.
Servant: Yes, your highness.
He left, door closed behind him.
Chrysalis, still sitting in her bed, her back against the head of her luxurious bed, was contemplating the moon outside. It was full tonight.
Chrysalis: I dreamed of this for far too long to stop now. I'll make sure this powerful pony... or rather princess.... won't oppose to my plans of invasions. My subjects are hungry and I have to make sure that their queen will respect her duty to make them feed to fill their stomachs. Yes. That cutesy Cadence won't see what hit her...

I hope you liked. BEautiful work. Quite the villain that queen.
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:iconmagicbiaze:
MagicBIaze Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
tl;dr
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:iconultradj4ever:
ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Nightmare Moon invaded her dreams?
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cajobif Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Not exactly. Luna gone into her dream and tried to give her a "message" that attempting to invade Canterlot would bring her to her lost and that she was ready to stop her.

Maybe I went over the top since Luna must watch dreams upon ponies and not other creatures, but I got the idea from "This day is going to be perfect, the kind of day which I dreamed since I was small" and gone with that.
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ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
Ah, that does make sense, and maybe the power drained her enough and that's why Luna wasn't there for the invasion? Who knows.
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:iconcajobif:
cajobif Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
That will remain a mystery. Or a hole to fill with a fanfic, if there is not one written already.
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:iconultradj4ever:
ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
It'd be interesting if there was a fic of that already
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CinderScript Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well. Might need to find another food source, but I must admit that the emerald flames look lovely against the sunset.
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Evanzblack Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
coool!   Crystalys ruls!   XD hejejeje 
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Neulibrium5 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
just another. . . sorta  peaceful after noon.
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Black-Nocturne Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Что для чейнджлинга отлично, то для поней ужасное несчастье))
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SrMario Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
FOR THE QUEEEEEEEN!!!!!! :iconchangelinglaplz:
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:iconsobana-blupaw:
Sobana-Blupaw Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
I love me some happy endings...
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MrCharlesFWF Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
It's sooooo beautiful!
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NorthWolf1488 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
Красота!) 
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kyle23emma Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
whoah :/
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FeanorKelsick Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
nice piece, a disturbing look into what might have been..
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Here-for-the-ponies Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh Shit.
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:iconmagicman001:
MagicMan001 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
D'awww, isn't that rampant death, destruction and unfathomable pony sadness just heart-warming?

Queen Chrysalis: (to mind-controlled SA) Ready for round fifty, dear?
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cimarronboy Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This gives me an idea for an "if chryssy had won" story. The angle makes me wonder what it's like down in the city (evac efforts, firefighting efforts, etc)
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templar127 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Its beautiful!

XD
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timfortune9 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
What a great honeymoon.
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Scyphi Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Exactly what I was thinking. :P
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schneelocke Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Cool picture -- a very interesting alternate future.
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richfiles Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconlunakiddingmeplz:
Ah... So that is what that insect dreams about at night... Creepy...
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TheCawOfCrows Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
spooky if it happened.
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bbasco2 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Some mares just want to watch the world burn...
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Ponkool4 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
This is so wonderfully evil!
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Darkkseid Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Sniff...I love a happy ending.
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XxTylerxXX Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Huehuahue
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PsycoJosho Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Also, the title reminds me of Golden Sun: Dark Dawn.
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PsycoJosho Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
If you would frame just the two of them, and maybe the sunset w/o the background changelings, that would be such a funny pic!
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