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Shading has improved a lot here. I also notice the skillful application of some reflected light, and, although seemingly sketchy, I like the way RD's wings were illustrated. I feel like I fill in most of the detail automatically as I look over it. As to Twilight, I really like how expressive her walk is and the stylized flatness of her tail.
Last thing I literally just noticed, impressive job of lapping RD's hair in a 3 dimensional fashion. Normally it's illustrated exclusive to one side or the other but you managed to naturally lay it down her back.

Although I liked Twilight's tail, I do not like RD's. It's fat and voluminous like a balloon as opposed to her mane which is far more naturally. The other thing that strikes me as odd is her wings. The angle of her entire body is slanted ever so slightly towards the foreground but her left wing drops below her right wing. It's inconsistent with the angle and appears odd although many might not immediately point it out.
Twilight's expression isn't sold very well either. I can see that she's biting her lip but at the same time compared to how expressive the rest is, it's not nearly as well exaggerated. I also feel like the shading on her legs is inconsistent with the shading on RD. Light appears to be coming from the top left and top right but on Twilight it appears to only be from the top.

All in all, another good job. I apologize if I seem overly critical.
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izzysandFfire Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015
Rainbow's tail is toothpaste : )
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:iconluted:
Luted Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
RD's a lucky gal.
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why you so sexy, Twilight??? :love: :love: :love:
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:iconmady3261:
mady3261 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Student Artist
pppppoooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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:iconhorse678:
Horse678 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I would rate this are Rule 34, but glorious rule 34.
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:iconmizumi-no-okami:
Mizumi-No-Okami Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Twilight is like "Rainbow, RAINBOW!
dangerzone"
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:iconizzysandffire:
izzysandFfire Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015
Top bun(s)
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:iconnekoiy:
Nekoiy Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
can I make a base out of this?
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:iconunderpable:
Underpable Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Student General Artist
no
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:iconnekoiy:
Nekoiy Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
ok thanks for telling me though!
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:iconlightningchaser2000:
LightningChaser2000 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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:icondecadent-depraved:
Decadent-Depraved Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Writer
"You can be my wingmare anytime, Twilight."
"Ponyfeathers; you can be mine."
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ShikimaAkemi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Student General Artist
Pff~ :rofl:

Ok, I wasn't expecting this one XD
Cool dialogues!! :clap:
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:iconattack193:
attack193 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
lol
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:icongreenfrogribbit:
GreenFrogRibbit Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
Dat ass!
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:iconbronytrainman:
Because every loves lesbians!

(Also got to say that Twilight dose look particularly sexy. B)
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:iconshrivak:
shrivak Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I sense a motorboat coming....
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:iconfanatictvzombie:
FanaticTVzombie Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
But if it was the other way around, twilight wouldn't be able to contain herself.
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:iconhllday:
hllday Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Daaaaaayyyyyyymmmmn
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:iconbronyhighfive63:
BronyHighFive63 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG XD
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sabrina1303 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Contain yourself, Rainbow. Contain yourself. You don't need da plot
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HoshinoTama777 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
(Stops laughing)
Okay, when I saw this, I just had to start laughing. I'm honestly surprised at how well I can type this as I'm currently laughing my @$$ off. 
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elpachonisimo Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Writer
Que belleza que estilo maravilloso Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Celestia Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna 
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:icondeathsinger45:
deathsinger45 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
*chuckles*
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:iconthedrsmiley:
TheDrSmiley Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
xD ahahahh
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:iconthemetallicabrony:
TheMetallicABrony Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Even Rainbow Dash wants dat sweet plot
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:iconidislikecake:
idislikecake Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maverick plz.
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spiderguy126 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
rainbow dash my little pony mlp brony 
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:iconundercover-brony:
Undercover-Brony Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Gotta say, love your style here. And Dash? Don't worry. You're not the only one who thinks Twi looks hot in that outfit.
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:iconbiancathekitty:
BiancaTheKitty Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I COMPLETELY SHIP IT 
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:iconmaltese101:
maltese101 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
youre looking at the royal plot dashie

and you got a wing boner

La la la la 
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MorphiusX Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icongutsmanplz:
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MetalBladePegasus Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Wing boner, seems that Dash is into mares in uniforms. That's why she's so nervous around Spitfire.
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FierceAustinDeadbolt Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
really dashie?
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piegirl290 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
O_O

rainbow dash: :D

twilight: .3. it's my mom's...
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Doggirl2626 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
That plot though
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:iconmorphiusx:
MorphiusX Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icongutsmanplz:
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:iconartis-artbox:
Artis-ArtBox Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
EEEEWWWWWWWW GROSS
(i mean it is a good peice but eewww)
I just found this in the more from devART section and I couldn't see he whole pic xD
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:iconthe-wasted-youth:
The-Wasted-Youth Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
xD lol yeah
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lavamonkey26 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Cute drawing.
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:iconsqueakynoodle:
SqueakyNoodle Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Lolz!
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xChocolateHeartx Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondatplotplz:
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kelly12345678910 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
Amazing!
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:icontoastytop:
ToastyTop Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is just awsome
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:iconacruxic:
Acruxic Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Student Filmographer
i hate you cloppers so muuuuuch =3=;
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:iconkapu-official:
Kapu-Official Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
can i ask why? :3
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Acruxic Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Filmographer
Why?
WHY?
What kind of questio-

Okay to get this answer over with and get it through you I'll say why =3=..
You masturbate
to multi colored
ugly ponies.
You masturbate
to a kids show.
Do you know how sick that is?
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Kapu-Official Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well i just dont understand why you come to such pictures then o:
I mean, is it your business what we do, or what we not?

Everyone has a wierd fetish or something. 
I for one am gay. And i dont kack off to this.
I just like to look at some clopper stuff, cause its funny, and entertaining. 

I just always wonder why you comment that you hate people o:
What does it help to you?
If you dont like it, dont watch it. 
If you dont like it, you dont have to say it to the whole world. 

I never understood this hating stuff. 
Are you sick, or do your parents dont love you? Dont get eneough attention, and now you want to argue with people, cause thats the last way you know? Or are you just an asshole? :1
whats leads you to comment useless stuff like that?
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Acruxic Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Filmographer
It was in the attack on titan category.
Why am I not surprised your gay.
It can't be helped man.
If I don't like something I tend to speak my mind whether it's needed or not
and yes I am an asshole
so thanks.
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Thyrai Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
Dear lord, the intermingled hypocrisy and preteen angst in your comments is almost overwhelming. Do you take classes or something? It's very impressive
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