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My Eyes Are Up Here by Underpable My Eyes Are Up Here by Underpable
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Shading has improved a lot here. I also notice the skillful application of some reflected light, and, although seemingly sketchy, I like the way RD's wings were illustrated. I feel like I fill in most of the detail automatically as I look over it. As to Twilight, I really like how expressive her walk is and the stylized flatness of her tail.
Last thing I literally just noticed, impressive job of lapping RD's hair in a 3 dimensional fashion. Normally it's illustrated exclusive to one side or the other but you managed to naturally lay it down her back.

Although I liked Twilight's tail, I do not like RD's. It's fat and voluminous like a balloon as opposed to her mane which is far more naturally. The other thing that strikes me as odd is her wings. The angle of her entire body is slanted ever so slightly towards the foreground but her left wing drops below her right wing. It's inconsistent with the angle and appears odd although many might not immediately point it out.
Twilight's expression isn't sold very well either. I can see that she's biting her lip but at the same time compared to how expressive the rest is, it's not nearly as well exaggerated. I also feel like the shading on her legs is inconsistent with the shading on RD. Light appears to be coming from the top left and top right but on Twilight it appears to only be from the top.

All in all, another good job. I apologize if I seem overly critical.
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Mizumi-No-Okami Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Twilight is like "Rainbow, RAINBOW!
dangerzone"
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Nekoiy Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  New member Professional Interface Designer
can I make a base out of this?
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Underpable Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Student General Artist
no
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Nekoiy Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  New member Professional Interface Designer
ok thanks for telling me though!
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LightningChaser2000 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Decadent-Depraved Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Student Writer
"You can be my wingmare anytime, Twilight."
"Ponyfeathers; you can be mine."
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attack193 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
lol
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GreenFrogRibbit Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
Dat ass!
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Because every loves lesbians!

(Also got to say that Twilight dose look particularly sexy. B)
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shrivak Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I sense a motorboat coming....
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