Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
March 19, 2013
Image Size
1.2 MB
Resolution
1141×1664
Submitted with
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
4,272
Favourites
668 (who?)
Comments
26
Downloads
311
×
SPAAACE by Underpable SPAAACE by Underpable
:iconderpy-hooves: durp

I failed it. Background sucks.
Add a Comment:
 
:iconschreiter:
I wouldn't call it a failed drawing, though, you may be joking in the description. What I see you trying to accomplish is conveying is Derpy's carefree joy and energy and using that to tell a story.

You definitely portrayed this nature in Derpy with that dynamic pose. Bonus points on portraying that pose and maintaining correct anatomy. The selective use of detail makes her smile the first thing you see, followed by the dynamic pose, fully conveying her joyful energy. After establishing this aspect of her personality, the eyes are free to take in the rest of her pose, and move down to the TARDIS, noticing The Doctor's near-panic at her antics. A nice little story, if not very new, told rather skillfully.

The only thing I would suggest is adding a bit more detail to the Doctor. At this point, the eyes move down to him simply because there is more to see in the picture. Derpy commands our attention fully. A little more detail might help draw the eyes to him after having first seen Derpy.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
22 out of 24 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconpencilponies:
PencilPonies Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Durp."
Wiser words were never spoken.
Reply
:iconroyal-phoenix:
royal-phoenix Jan 24, 2014   Traditional Artist
Derpy Emoticon : LOOK! I CAN FLY WITHOUT MY WINGS!!
Dr. Whooves La : DERPY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! GET. IN. THE. TARDIS. NOW!!
Derpy Emoticon : But there's an air bubble..........

Reply
:iconblackrose11a:
BlackRose11A Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The FINAL frontier
Reply
:iconmurdershy1163:
Murdershy1163 Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dr. Whooves La  Doctor Whooves: Derpy? wtf are you doing... sigh 

Code name: Muffin?        Derpy: Well, you told me to go outside and play! 
Reply
:iconapplebloom5555:
SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE
:iconspacecoreplz:
Reply
:iconkateboat:
Kateboat Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww. <3
Reply
:iconengrishman:
Actually I kind of like the background. Simplistic and fits the minimalist style of this real well.
Reply
:iconcrimsionlight:
crimsionlight Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Flying in space
Reply
:iconneila-nuruodo:
neila-nuruodo Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I love this :D The facial expressions really make this picture.
Reply
:iconcajobif:
Derpy: Look Doctor! I can fly even if there is no air!
Doctor: W-what?

Beautiful work.
Reply
Add a Comment: