I like the joke (with the whole "FOR DUMMIES" book). I like the way Twilight came out however the color on her mane looks too dark and her coat looks too light. The lines on her left wing (her left not the one shown in the perspective) look less solid compared to her right and could be improved upon the next time (if there is a next time) Her snout (or nose?) looks a tad bit too large and it looks kind of sharp. I realize her eyes are meant to be big, but the pupils are too big (at least in my opinion). I know I’m sounding kind of harsh, but what I have mentioned are just minor issues.
lols. the concept is very funny! I've seen this picture 2 times now and both times made me smile *puts on pinkie's smile song* i love the picture of Celestia that says"send ponies to the moon" that is priceless!it's also very well drawn and super cute! it all seems to balance out. my only thing is that twilight's nose is a bit too pointy. it should be a bit rounder. other then that, i love this! keep up the awesome job! see! even twilight loves this picture! well, bye now. I'm kinda out of stuff to say. thanks for reading this!
Overall I love it and I think you did a good job!
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